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It is not necessary to follow every TRC exercise with an assignment to students for an original paper. Students learn writing skills from the TRC exercises. Several can be presented before a paper is assigned, just as a teacher might suggest several reading selections before requiring a paper. The difference between TRC and regular reading is that TRC encourages active processing of the material, with detailed study of the content and organization -- as Jones emphasized with his comment that one could read until his eyes are read, but only by copying word for word could one see how a writer builds up his effect.

Earlier we discussed "Lightning and Larcenists Strike Twice," a five-paragraph theme on a common saying. The five-paragraph theme was the quintessential writing assignment for many years in English classes. Recently some English educators have objected to its use, pointing out that most real-life pieces of writing do not fit this neat format. In her research report, Emig rechristens it the "Fifty-Star Theme" to satirize its wide usage in schools. But many teachers still feel it makes an effective exercise by providing a framework for students who are not accustomed to organizing their ideas in writing.

Rather than totally banish the five-paragraph theme, we can teach students to use it flexibly and see it as just one format for supporting a generalizations with sufficient, convincing details. In Analytical Writing and Thinking, after students reconstruct "Lightning and Larcenists . . ." they do another TRC with instructions explaining that they can use a different format if it is more appropriate for the paper they write and the experiences they highlight.

 

Instructions: The last paper you wrote employs three examples to disprove
the saying "Lightning never strikes twice." Sometimes it is unnecessary to
use several examples to illustrate a point. One example rich with details can
present a convincing picture for your readers, as you will see in the next
paper.
Exercise 1. Number the sentences within each paragraph in the best order.
Do Not Judge a Lady by Her Bags
Introduction
____ A Los Angeles police report supports this advice.
____ "Don't judge a book by its cover" means do not make a final judgement
 based on a first impression or just surface appearance.
____ Dressed in a torn raincoat, stained sweatpants, and old running shoes
 with several toes poking out, she peered at the world through scraggly,
 dirty hair hanging over her weather-beaten face.
____ In that city of movie stars a homeless woman, a bag lady, wandered
 the streets totally penniless.
____ She always pushed a shopping cart full of bags, putting bits of food
 from a handout or a garbage can in them for a later meal.
 Public facilities served her bathroom needs.
____ The beach was her bedroom in warm weather, doorways and the bus
 depot when the temperature dropped.
Body Paragraph
____ But the real surprise came when the police searched her bags for
 identification.
____ One afternoon she passed out on a crowded street.
____ Taken to the poverty ward of the county hospital, she was diagnosed
 as suffering from untreated tuberculosis which had weakened her
 body to a life-threatening degree.
____ A careful accounting later revealed that the women had given away
 the interest from all her investments, leaving nothing for herself.
____ They also found cancelled checks showing huge contributions to chari-
 ties such as the United Way and the American Cancer Society.
____ They found stock and bond certificates totalling $750,000.
Body Paragraph
____ She went wild buying clothing, jewelry, airline tickets, friends, cars,
 and other trinkets which brought her selfish pleasure.
____ She explained that when she was twenty-three she had won two
 million dollars in a state lottery.
____ When the press got wind of the news, reporters flocked to this unusual
 person's bedside to interview her for their readers and viewers.
 
____ She was under seven minutes before a lifeguard pulled her to the
 surface and into a boat.
____ One day, while swimming in the Pacific, she was gripped by a paralyz-
 ing cramp and sank beneath the water.
____ Rushed to a hospital, she lay unconscious for five hours and was not
 expected to live.
____ Then miraculously her eyes opened.
____ A nurse spoke to her but she seemed not to hear.
____ The next day she left the hospital and began her life of total self-
 sacrifice.
____ She just stared into space and said, "Yes. Yes I will. I'll use it all to help."
Conclusion
____ However, the Los Angeles bag lady impressed upon me most the need
 to suspend judgement about a person until you get to know him or
 her well.
____ I have met people who looked honest but were really white collar
 criminals, who acted friendly but were really backstabbers, and who
 looked dull but turned out to be interesting, understanding friends.
____ I have seen other examples where first impressions and appearances
 have been deceptive.

After students complete "Do Not Judge A Lady," they are given the following assignment for an original paper:

Pick another common saying. Several are listed below, but you can use a different one. Write about 250 words analyzing the saying by explaining what it means and giving one or more examples to show where it is or is not true.

The grass is always greener on the other side of the fence. Different strokes for different folks. Absence makes the heart grow fonder. Bigger is better. Look before you leap. Haste makes waste. Possession is nine-tenths of the law. If you dance to the music, you must pay the piper. You can't teach an old dog new tricks. A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. Don't put all your eggs in one basket. Pretty is as pretty does.

Asking students to give "one or more examples" frees them to deviate from the five-paragraph format and use any organization which lends coherence to their ideas and supporting details. They can use depth, breadth, or any mixture of specifics in supporting their meaning.

When students are assigned an original paper, they can begin by writing a few notes -- not organized into a formal outline but just written as they come to mind -- on ideas and details to include. Students who, after a few minutes of such brainstorming, feel they have enough material for a paper can start writing immediately. Others can brainstorm in pairs or groups for a few minutes to stir up opinions and experiences through discussion. This generally gives everyone enough material to start writing.

If students complete their papers at different times, the instructor may read them through quickly and discuss weak or strong points individually -- perhaps suggesting additional development of an example; explaining a usage error and assigning a few pertinent exercises; or praising progress and commending effective writing. In combination with this, students can read other's papers in pairs or preassigned groups and offer suggestions for improvements before papers are rewritten to be handed in.

Students find it easier to think of something to write about after reconstructing several sample papers. Through organizing and copying, they see in fine detail how ideas are developed and supported. Sometimes sample papers can be used as springboards for original papers. The paper "Buffet Table" is a very basic, structured writing exercise.
 
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